I Need Help on my Riddles
*Riddles is Ridley
This is a little sketch I did in like 20 minutes, and the hardest part was Ridley's wings, face and Samus. Something seems off though, and I can't tell. I also want input by people before I finish it and not like it.
He smokes from his nose, he'll give Samus second hand smoke if he no stop.
Well, the one thing is just that Ridley's body is generally more "boney" and skinny-looking than in this drawing. In more consistent anatomy, his ribs stick right out, his limbs are all skin and bone, and his tail's a bit slim and scaley.
Other than that, this is alright.
Samus's head is smaller than her shoulders.
#IAmNotAnArtist, but it looks like a good start to me. The few critiques I could make are that I feel like the smoke from his nostrils should be travelling in a uniform direction so it doesn't end up looking like a mustache, and that the slight curve at the back of his mouth makes it almost look like he's happy to see Samus. The wings look great though, I can tell you put a lot of effort into them. Hope that helps!
@gendreavus oh yes, I've received a many mustache critics (I even agree) and the wings are... well I spent a large portion of time on them lol
@Metroid3D is that it?
@kkzero yeah, I can see how he's skinny and stuff, and I'll fix that, I did put his ribs, but they're not noticeable. I didn't finish the tail, but I can certainly thin it out and stuff.
That first one is pretty dank. Make "mob boss" Ridley smoke through his ears.